I keep forgetting to leave a comment here, but i enjoyed this game! I was a little confused with the discussion but i got everything right at the end :D i love the interactions between Mr. Detective and Mr. Assistant! Looking forward for the full version!
Not only was the duo incredibly funny together, but seem to be very interesting charas on their own :D
The dialog overall was written very well and I loved how it would sometimes forward itself - that added to its comedic timing very well xD Also, the way important text was given a different color was a nice detail!
Also, the worldbuilding (or at least the hints that were given in this demo) is suuuuper intriguing!! Magic, different worlds, whatever Mr. assistant is... so many interesting things :D
As for the gameplay, I really loved the Discussion time!! (even if I'm an idiot who never got the right choice first x'D I hope there'll be an easy way to replenish the TP in the full game haha) It totally fits with the mystery/detective theme of the game and really made me think about how someone could kill the victim!! I also liked the red herring that was given in the investigation. That did throw me off-guard a little bit xD
I was a bit disappointed though, that the investigation itself was mostly on one spot (aka the body)... I personally would have liked it if the player could look for more clues on the map >-< (Well, on the other hand, a bathroom stall is also pretty small x'D)
I was super surprised when the demo ended though!! Just as I was preparing myself to investigate them!!!! So that's why I hope that this game will be completed one day! I really wanna see more of these charas and figure out who the killer is! UvU
Thank you so much for the full-length review!! ;; I'll write a full-length reply!
I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed it!
The writing was honestly one of my biggest dev block ^^" Writing the murder case was hard, but it was harder writing the characters' chemistry ;; so I'm glad it conveyed well!
Glad you like the worldbuilding too! The playtesters were my friends that are already aware of the universe, so I was afraid it was too ambigous or confusing for new players ;;
I hope the discussion wasn't too difficult! Nobody so far has got through it without losing any TP, so don't worry! Good job for making it through XD
Thanks a lot for the critique also! I do think the exploration/investigation bit is not that exciting. I'll try to somehow make it more fun if I finish this!
I hope you get the "ending" with the credits!
Your review really did make me wanna finish this game tho ;; I hope you'll keep on supporting me through the development if I do! ^^
You don't know how happy I am when people play this and give positive feedback on it,,, so once again, thank you so so very much!!! ;;
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I keep forgetting to leave a comment here, but i enjoyed this game! I was a little confused with the discussion but i got everything right at the end :D i love the interactions between Mr. Detective and Mr. Assistant! Looking forward for the full version!
Aww I'm so happy for your very nice comment! I'm glad you enjoyed this demo and the characters! I hope I can finish it soon ^^
I enjoyed this demo a lot!!
Not only was the duo incredibly funny together, but seem to be very interesting charas on their own :D
The dialog overall was written very well and I loved how it would sometimes forward itself - that added to its comedic timing very well xD Also, the way important text was given a different color was a nice detail!
Also, the worldbuilding (or at least the hints that were given in this demo) is suuuuper intriguing!! Magic, different worlds, whatever Mr. assistant is... so many interesting things :D
As for the gameplay, I really loved the Discussion time!! (even if I'm an idiot who never got the right choice first x'D I hope there'll be an easy way to replenish the TP in the full game haha) It totally fits with the mystery/detective theme of the game and really made me think about how someone could kill the victim!! I also liked the red herring that was given in the investigation. That did throw me off-guard a little bit xD
I was a bit disappointed though, that the investigation itself was mostly on one spot (aka the body)... I personally would have liked it if the player could look for more clues on the map >-< (Well, on the other hand, a bathroom stall is also pretty small x'D)
I was super surprised when the demo ended though!! Just as I was preparing myself to investigate them!!!!
So that's why I hope that this game will be completed one day! I really wanna see more of these charas and figure out who the killer is! UvU
Thank you so much for the full-length review!! ;; I'll write a full-length reply!
I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed it!
The writing was honestly one of my biggest dev block ^^" Writing the murder case was hard, but it was harder writing the characters' chemistry ;; so I'm glad it conveyed well!
Glad you like the worldbuilding too! The playtesters were my friends that are already aware of the universe, so I was afraid it was too ambigous or confusing for new players ;;
I hope the discussion wasn't too difficult! Nobody so far has got through it without losing any TP, so don't worry! Good job for making it through XD
Thanks a lot for the critique also! I do think the exploration/investigation bit is not that exciting. I'll try to somehow make it more fun if I finish this!
I hope you get the "ending" with the credits!
Your review really did make me wanna finish this game tho ;; I hope you'll keep on supporting me through the development if I do! ^^
You don't know how happy I am when people play this and give positive feedback on it,,, so once again, thank you so so very much!!! ;;